Un Oasis en el Desierto

Video Description:

(In Spanish with English subtitles)

Contest: 2013 Goodness Reigns “Share the Story”

Created By: Anallely Rojas

Location: Mexico
Experience Level: Beginner


One comment on “Un Oasis en el Desierto

  1. Judges' Comments on said:

    The message of hope is a good one. There are some difficulties to work on. First, the poor lighting is a distraction, both in depicting the narrator and in seeing the sub (super) titles. Also, the narrator’s face is too close to the camera and some of the translations are inaccurate and thus distracting. Cleaned up, I think this film’s message and method would be better suited to a children’s audience.
    -Fr. James Bromwich

    The laptop camera is not the best, and the hood is distracting. It’s best to memorize the script than to read it. You seem very sincere in your faith. God bless you.
    -Linda Bugos-Noble

    Beyond the technical issues in this film, your faith does shine! Continue to work on these technical aspects of filmmaking and your light will continue to illuminate the darkness!

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